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July 1, 2008

Diablo Cody

Filed under: screenwriter, talent — Tags: , — mscherer @ 8:08 pm

Lot’a buzz on the information highway about Diablo Cody. Some good, some bad, but most of it is sour grapes. Seems a lot of screenwriter wannabes – color them green – resent the fact that a first time screenwriter could actually earn an Academy Award.

Not since Joe Eszterhas have screenwriters been shoved to the fore and bathed in the light of publicity. How dare ‘shmucks with Underwoods’ steal the lime light? What will the world come to if writers –WRITERS! – get some recognition, any… recognition?
Heaven forbid.

Diablo Cody must be considered one of the following:
1. incredibly talented.
2. incredibly lucky.
3. or, both.
While there is always the possibility she is a OneTrickPony, only time will tell. But consider this: she sold, published her first book, then sold, and got produced her first screenplay, and to top everything took home the Oscar®. Not bad for a stripper from Minnesota.

I haven’t seen the movie (Juno) and have not read the screenplay, so until I do I will reserve judgment. Even then, no matter my thoughts, it will be only one man’s opinion. And we all know about opinions.

So if you have seen the movie and/or read the screenplay, let’s hear from you. What are your opinions? Good? Bad? Indifferent? OneTrickPony? Or the female reincarnation of Paddy Chayefsky?

Keep writing.

June 20, 2008

The Four Act Structure

Filed under: Screenwriting structure — Tags: , , — mscherer @ 4:47 pm

Over the past five years I have read dozens of books on screenwriting, searched hundreds of Web pages for tips and techniques, and spent a lot of time just plain THINKING (another excuse not to write). I have looked at the three, four, and nine act structures. Sequencing methods (anywhere from 8 to 16). The Hero’s Journey. Blake Snyder’s Beat Sheet, et-cetera, et-cetera, et-cetera.

What I have settled on, and what works for me, is a hybrid of the Four Act Structure and the Sequence Method. The template I use follows:

ACT I – The Loner
Sequence #1 ( 01-10) Setup: Protagonist In The Ordinary World
Sequence #2 ( 11-20) Call to Adventure / Predicament / Inciting Incident
Sequence #3 (21-30) Turing Point: Change Of Plans / New Lower Obstacles

ACT II – The Wanderer
Sequence #4 ( 31-40) Elaborating on the Dilemma and The World of Story
Sequence #5 ( 41-50) Hero encounters TESTS, ALLIES, and ENEMIES.
Sequence #6 (51-60) Point Of No Return / Discovery Of False Goal

ACT III – Towards The True Goal: The Warrior Phase
Sequence #7 ( 61-70) Complications, Higher Stakes, And Subplots
Sequence #8 ( 71-80) Culmination Toward The Main Plot
Sequence #9 (81-90 ) All Hope Is Lost

ACT IV – Result Of The Action: The Martyr
Sequence #10 ( 91-95 ) Final Push Toward The Main Plot
Sequence #11 ( 96-100) False Resolution (The Twist)
Sequence #12 (101-105) Final Test of Character and True Resolution
Sequence #13 (106-110) Final Confrontation
Sequence #14 (111-115) Climax

That’s it. Comments?

Keep Writing.

 

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